Month Away -April (21.04.’16)

IMG_1426“Instead of writing down everything that happens in your day, give your day a twist by fictionalising it”
“Practise using the 6 elements of story: Action, Description, Dialogue, Introspection, Emotion, and Exposition”

 

The ceiling in the hole dripped. No one fixed it yet, apart from a piece of paper stuck to it. 

Shadows shuffled in the corner. Hash inched to Hover’s ear “Wonder who moved it” he said, .
“Koala probably” said Hover, glinting
Hash switched off his torch “No”. He rested his chin on his arms “He would’ve tipped it over and left” .

Hover snorted, his hair flopping to the front. ” yeah, typical”.
They glanced up and down the ceiling. More water trickled, and the pressure got louder. Then they heard snores from under the desk . Hash’s face shot up “Wha..” Hover chuckled “Let’s see” he said crawl out of his blanket Hash hesitated, and then crawled “Shh”

 Chief lay under the desk in a wool beanie. His legs rested on the wall.
The boys gawked, their heads flinching back. “Aikai”  they said
“What’s he doing here?” said Hash, lowering his voice again.
“We shouldn’t spend the whole night here again ” 
“Psst” he’s wearing green. “Let’s follow ” “Maybe somethings wrong?”. 

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