“Instead of writing down everything that happens in your day, give your day a twist by fictionalising it”
“Practise using the 6 elements of story: Action, Description, Dialogue, Introspection, Emotion, and Exposition”
Kimo’s hair flapped as he clasped the pole. . “We need to get to the monkey bars” he said, trying to keep his eyes open. The submarine growled again, and again. Hover slumped on the stairs, leaning on his hands. He stared at the wafer packets. Kimo frowned “Hover” he said, bearing his teeth, “You can’t just keep wallowing about them ” Kimo strangled the pole. “You have to let go” he said. His eyes softened “There’s no time for that stuff.”.
Hover brushed his hands on the wall and looked up. “No”. He pulled himself up and bared his teeth. “I need to taste the strawberry, the melon, and the lemon ones”. The stairs creaked. Kimo took a deep breath, and stared as Hover jumped off the stairs and scattered to the corner. Both boys looked up and then stared at each other.. The lights began to flicker.